Wednesday, November 04, 2009

DEW DROP ON THE ROSE PETAL

The night bore no witnesses…calling none but we
No eyes to stare, just stillness, you and me.

No moonlight this time to shine of your skin.
No silhouettes in the darkness, no dungeons deep.

There were no poems recited just raw passion unleashed,
No eyes to stare, just stillness, you and me.

There was a whole meadow to choose from
But I picked the rose, one petal at time and pain of the thorn

...or was it the other way around??

No words spoken, just moans and sighs
Heartbeats exchanged in the calm of night.

Hushed up words, secrets kept,
As the night passed into light…
The colour of your lips, or was it the prism,
The sun came out to reveal the smiles

When I climaxed to the taste of dewdrop on the rose petal.


16 comments:

Apparently Intellectual said...

:)

Netika Lumb said...

Now, it is clear..

Ria said...

:) Loved it!!

Devika said...

That was the poet Mayank Mediratta i was looking for! :)

Beautiful, Mayank :)

wishes,
devika

shruti said...

seductive!!!!!!

venus66 said...

Beautiful poem after a long time.:)

VickY said...

nice bro.

How Do said...

i came back to read the dewdrop metaphor again.. and this time, it makes a lot more sense.

Sup! said...

Landed here randomly. U got some good shit here, eh!

................your's entirely said...

sensuous delight....just raw talent unleashed....

Ishq (Love) said...

ahhh...how sensuous :)

and guess karo main kaun hoon?

Mayz said...

m not nastradamus n u r not alicia silverstone :p

Devika said...

Oh around??

Time for a new one, Mayandamus :)

wishes,
devika

Anonymous said...

Nostradamus*

Meow said...

Very romantic this one is...

Reality Check said...

Nice way you painted a picture!! I am biased tho. I have always loved your writing.. But this is great!

Now excuse me while I take a cold shower! hahahahaha