Meri kismat ko tu jitna badal le magar sunle
Jo mera ho nahi paya woh tu mujhe de nahi sakta
(these lines have been inspired by Dr Kumar Vishwas’ poem Koi Deewana Kehta Hai)
the first line is not correct dear. it goes like this....meri chaahat ko dulhan tu bana lena magar sun le....jo mera ho nahi paaya wo tera ho nahi sakta.
hmm...good to see a post from u after a long time.
GazalYeah I know...even the second line is not the same.As i said the lines inspired me to write my own version
Well Success is never final. Failure is never fatal. It is courage that counts
u too talking to god these days?? :)listen to this---http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rhI7cPiy_g0
btw your lines made a lot of sense...more than you can even imagine!!
Angels never lieall those motivational words mean zilch to me right now.
Oh... I thot you wrote his version...But I loved your version too as much as I love his.Awsum.And true.
yep, they sound naught wen we need dem da most...btw nice lines...
good to see u after so long:)..i liked ur version a lot..has a lot of meaning..
niceeeeee!
hmmm....ideas in red and black :-)
mmm...love, still a mystery to me but so clear to the rest.
Snehawhat love???
Uh! I see love wheenver I read a poem! I find someway to connect every poem I read with love! My fault! :)
Hain?
true..
when r u going to post again pls?
bhokaal :)
awesome man,, this just inspired me to write my version tooo, hahaha
aalllaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :)
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the first line is not correct dear. it goes like this....
meri chaahat ko dulhan tu bana lena magar sun le....
jo mera ho nahi paaya wo tera ho nahi sakta.
hmm...good to see a post from u after a long time.
Gazal
Yeah I know...even the second line is not the same.
As i said the lines inspired me to write my own version
Well Success is never final. Failure is never fatal. It is courage that counts
u too talking to god these days?? :)
listen to this---
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rhI7cPiy_g0
btw your lines made a lot of sense...more than you can even imagine!!
Angels never lie
all those motivational words mean zilch to me right now.
Oh... I thot you wrote his version...
But I loved your version too as much as I love his.
Awsum.
And true.
yep, they sound naught wen we need dem da most...btw nice lines...
good to see u after so long:)..i liked ur version a lot..has a lot of meaning..
niceeeeee!
hmmm....ideas in red and black :-)
mmm...love, still a mystery to me but so clear to the rest.
Sneha
what love???
Uh! I see love wheenver I read a poem! I find someway to connect every poem I read with love! My fault! :)
Hain?
true..
when r u going to post again pls?
bhokaal :)
awesome man,, this just inspired me to write my version tooo, hahaha
aalllaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :)
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